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Depression

Each day when I look in the mirror, I see sorrow that no one else sees. A burial shroud of depression has gathered its grip about me. I wish I could live without shadows and walk where the others have been. I'd tell everyone that I'd meet there how I've left a life that's never been. But this doom somehow follows through thick and thin. I've tried hard to leave it behind. So I guess I'll just be what I'm meant to be and get used to a life not desired. It brings sadness to turn from the sunshine and christen the funeral pyre, but the burial shroud of depression wraps me tight and holds to the fire.

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Date: 1/17/2012 5:02:00 PM
Depression.. you still have me baby, to talk to, stand tall and suck in the air, i've been on the bridge at 3am, thought it might hurt if i fell down there, reef ya self up by the bootstraps, stay with johnson the looni-tic yeah... thanks Madeleine
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Date: 5/13/2011 2:58:00 AM
Sorry babe but lifes a bitch for us not super rich great verse mate very emotive with me xo Don don't play with Aussie snakes no more stupidity it seems for sure
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Date: 4/14/2011 5:57:00 PM
I really like this one. The use of four lines per stanza gives it a nice fluid sound. I particularly liked the last stanza. I can relate.
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Date: 6/16/2010 4:08:00 AM
Madeleine, I hope that this is just a very good write and not your life...I like the metaphoric language that you have used...Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara
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Date: 2/18/2010 7:12:00 AM
deep whoice of write you chose... i enjoyed the read Royal T.
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