Denoument

Clipped your wings my lovely one Heavy words adorn your crown Silence a corset Graceful steps once dancing Hide under skirts of silken lies I see you in memory long forgotten Dancing in the rain Laughing at my curiosities Hand in hand across summer field I see him come in from afar His delights upon dark horse You stand before me now Adorned in his beauty I weep I weep

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Space Cadet

Date: 8/23/2016 5:39:00 PM

Nicely worded. Thank you for sharing. W

Skat A

Date: 8/9/2016 12:45:00 AM

Audrey, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**

Tim Smith

Date: 8/8/2016 4:34:00 PM

A sad and moving poem Audrey...Welcome to the soup.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/7/2016 8:38:00 PM

Audrey,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Audrey Poore
Date: 8/7/2016 11:35:00 PM

Thank you for the warm welcome Linda.