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Denied Access To Eternal Life

Denied Access to Eternal Life When heaven’s gates are opened wide With friends and family welcomed inside As with dark souls I remain earthbound Hollowness in my heart would be profound Surely the landscape would fade to gray As I struggled to make sense of my fate Loneliness would fill my heart Words of remorse I would impart Even as late as that final day I believe there’d still be time to pray And if the gates still shut me out I’d have a great deal to think about Perhaps I could have been kinder And kept my temperament milder “Forgive me, Lord, for I failed you I could have done better, surely that’s true” Also left behind would be others who erred And never heeded God’s wise words Perhaps together we could grow again Overcome odds and make amends Love our brothers as intended Express grief to those we offended In God’s grace, the gates might reopen Making room for more who are now repentant

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/28/2010 8:49:00 PM
I like how you did yours,Carolyn. this one was too hard for me to try. I think you did very well with the topic. lUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/15/2010 11:45:00 AM
I would have expected this to be in the winner's circle. It is great. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/14/2010 10:31:00 AM
Here! Here! Great write, Carolyn. May the gates surely re-open. :-)
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Date: 8/13/2010 7:32:00 PM
I can relate so well to this poem my friend.
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Date: 8/13/2010 7:14:00 PM
Hey Carolyn. So nice to hear from you! I've missed you and the soup. Lovely words you have here. It saddens me to think so many of us occasionally feel as though we're not worthy of God's grace when nothing could be further from the truth. All are welcome in Heaven. It's in that simple acceptance that we find a deeper and very personal repentance,not from our sins, but from our misperceptions. Be well and drop me a line if you have time. I'd love to catch up:) -Yoni.
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Date: 8/12/2010 10:09:00 PM
Wonderful poem! We can all relate. Thanks for your kind words.
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Date: 8/10/2010 10:23:00 PM
a poem filled with hope. denied access of eternal life. sounds sad, but maybe more is asked to be done before that. ~Always
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Date: 8/10/2010 2:12:00 PM
Very nice couplet.I am doing ok.Lots of ups and downs but trying to stay busy and not let things get to me so easy.I posted a new poem.LIVING LIFE DAY BY DAY.Take a look if you get a chance.
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Date: 8/10/2010 2:10:00 PM
Good Evening Carolyn Speaking for myself , Only words of remorse I feel I hope I get to impart . True oh so true. The Code Coma is just pure imagination on my part just fantasy although day to day reality is starting to feel like a coma or ground hog day, May I say thank you to you for taking the time to read my poem , Cheers
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Date: 8/10/2010 9:59:00 AM
Awesome write Carolyn, love the whole idea behind it as well.. Love Wilma
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Date: 8/10/2010 8:20:00 AM
Lots of food for thought here. The catch is - just what are "God's wise words?" Relax, Carolyn. When they see you coming, the gates will open wide and there will be a huge celebration. Love, Dave
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Date: 8/10/2010 6:11:00 AM
Wishing you the best in the contest Carolyn. I am truly speechless. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/9/2010 11:51:00 PM
hope to make the cut...:)
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Date: 8/9/2010 11:19:00 PM
God will never shut gates or shut anyone out. We do this all by ourselves with our own thinking and our fears. But this couplet is so well written. Repentance is always good, but so is gratitude. Thanks for sharing your faith, Carolyn. Take care. Your friend, Caroline.
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Date: 8/9/2010 8:46:00 PM
You wont be denied..they need loving poets in heaven. This made me sad and happy at the same time. BG
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