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Demons In My Sleep

I'll close my eyes Just to open them wide Bloodshot eyes in the morning I couldn't stay asleep With the demons constantly roaring Inside my mind, they roam deep I'll try agian tomorrow This time I'll bring a knife They feed off of my sorrow But they won't take away my life One day I'll find peace Here on Earth I won't truly decease I'll have a rebirth Written on October 31, 2015

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Date: 4/20/2017 11:53:00 AM
Hi Lily, very interesting write love it rate 7 :))))hugs from Ireland
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Lily Mayfield
Date: 5/5/2017 3:16:00 PM
Hey hey, 7 is my lucky number, I'll take it! Much love <3
Date: 11/14/2015 8:21:00 PM
Powerful work-Love Ettie
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Date: 10/31/2015 12:53:00 PM
A very well penned write Lilly which is portrayed so well for so many who suffer. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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Lily Mayfield
Date: 10/31/2015 8:16:00 PM
I still don't think I have portrayed it well enough, one day I will though... Thank you for the read
Date: 10/31/2015 4:00:00 AM
That sounds intense Lily. Find your peace, be reborn...
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Lily Mayfield
Date: 10/31/2015 8:15:00 PM
Thank you, Erina

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