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Demonic Noise

the voice of god anger surged in noise left me in awe it... was not God, no but a thing unknown shaking the ground it...was not God the cat's face changed her eyes turned dead black it cried, "TAKE MY SOUL BACK" *For Destroyer ~ Poet 's contest*

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Date: 3/23/2012 1:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Nature The Destroyer" contest Laura. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/21/2012 12:31:00 PM
Vivid image of the poor cat. Congratulations in the contest.
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Date: 3/19/2012 5:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in this contest Laura. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/16/2012 7:34:00 PM
Congrats on your HM, Laura! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/15/2012 10:41:00 PM
LAURA~.Congratulations ;-) THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest... Enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD
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Date: 3/13/2012 3:04:00 PM
Good God Girl! - Kyle
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Date: 3/13/2012 11:29:00 AM
wow Laura these are superb, good luck in contest. harry
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Date: 3/12/2012 10:48:00 PM
I've had a thing for demonized cats ever since the Michael Jackson Thriller video! Thanks for allowing me to have more fun with this phobia/fetish of mine :) jk
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Date: 3/12/2012 1:56:00 PM
Thanks for reading my stuff, Laura. Amazing about cats, eh. I like the way these Haiku seem to connect, ending very dramatically. Love, daver
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Date: 3/11/2012 4:24:00 PM
Much enjoyed Laura best of luck in the contest , Hugs Declan xxx
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Date: 3/9/2012 3:17:00 PM
laura, stopping by to peep on my entries... thank you.. love it.. always, PD ..
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Date: 3/9/2012 1:55:00 PM
Hey Laura, Very different take on this...very nice...good luck in the contest...Marty
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