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Deluge of My Words

I was lost in corridors of my mind as words flooded in. I had no Ark and couldn't swim. I thought I'd drown. The deluge carried me past doors, cracked open just a bit. Not wide enough to enter, and there was no turning back. Flood waters rose higher and I began to float on the deluge of my words that in Noah's Day was meant to kill. 8/27/16 A Deluge J. Ward

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Date: 8/30/2016 1:28:00 AM
When words take control, Wow! Lovely metaphor, Marti:) good to see you back writing...missed you
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Date: 8/27/2016 1:12:00 PM
I really loved your take on the theme Marti - Noah's ark and a deluge of words - VERY clever indeed - good luck in the contest - you have inspired me to write but not for the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/27/2016 12:36:00 PM
An interesting approach with your contest entry...It certainly imparts the feeling of being in the grip and mercy of powerful currents. Best of luck! My regards. :) john
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Date: 8/27/2016 12:32:00 PM
Very nice piece Marti. I like the metaphor you used. Good luck in said contest.
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