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Deliver Me (Etheree)

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Deliver Me (Etheree)

one day
I fell in
a muddy pit.
How did I get there?
Did someone push me in?
I just don’t understand this.
It must be my imagination.
Can someone explain this dream to me?
Oh no this can’t be happening to me!

Oh God please deliver me from this pit.
I’m crying from the depth of my soul.
Lord it’s dark and dreary down here.
I need your strength and guidance.
I need a helping hand.
Oh God I thank you
for hearing me
I’m coming 
out with

Copyright © Mary Duhart

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  1. Date: 8/8/2009 1:24:00 PM
    What an inspirational piece. Wow--a double etheree. Good use of this challenging form. Keep up the good writing. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen

  1. Date: 8/8/2009 6:04:00 AM
    What a grand Etheree dear friend. Thank you for sharing your writings from your heart Mary. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/8/2009 3:39:00 AM
    a powerful poem, how amazing he is, so many of us he pulled out of the mud, God bless you from diane

  1. Date: 8/7/2009 8:49:00 PM
    A great description of being delivered from the pit we sometimes fall into. God Bless Phyl