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Deepest Beauty

This morning woke up golden smiling headed into town on the car coming down from the mountain standing tallest in this small town Driving up the hill top to the church such a sight greeted my eyes as the sun it shone so very warm deep in such beauty lighting the center was the holy crucifix I blessed myself beholding such a vision as it looked like the holy spirit shining down straight from the steeple felt this warm forgiving fingers touching deep glowing in loves light Hope all love can ever do is wish one day you will see me in bliss inside Heaven opens it's wings I will greet you with the heart off very deep undeniable true pure love so complete with trust one gift that will forever inside of me It will sing in happiness rejoicing sweetly singing songbirds a song forever always in the finest of tunes touching beats I drew a style to honor such beauty beginning with nine syllables a silver lining cloud 8/7/8/9/now waves higher 10/11/12 gates of Heaven 12/12 singing in the highest note 11/10/9/8/7 finding comfort soothing rising the tune 8/9 sing in her clouded mist 9/9/10/11/12 love forever remains beautiful to the day you die my tune smiling

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Date: 11/10/2014 2:57:00 PM
Very spiritual in that you felt such power and warmth staring at the crucifix. Well penned and always with passion.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/10/2014 3:16:00 PM
yeah i found such warm peace in that moment timothy so i wrote how it felt for me pal thank you kindly dear pal for the wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated
Date: 11/10/2014 11:00:00 AM
When the inner self in harmony is, the beauty, upon the outer world is reflected! Excellent writing, dear Liam!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/10/2014 11:50:00 AM
yeah alone gives one time to reflect demetrios everything that touches love in your life forever remains beautiful i see wonderful comment thank you kindly bless you heartfelt appreciated
Date: 11/10/2014 6:38:00 AM
What a gem this is Liam, really enjoyed this beauty.. tc Wilma
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/10/2014 9:51:00 AM
thank you wilma for the truly wonderful comment bless you dear friend
Date: 11/9/2014 8:12:00 PM
I quote you"This morning woke up golden smiling" such a delightful way to start off this very refreshing landscape of beauty that you've painted here. Another awesome poem Liam, my dear friend. Written with all your heart and soul, and shining golden pen.....Lol...another awesome masterpiece! Love it! a 7 from me to you! God bless you! .... love and hugs! :) xxx D
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/10/2014 9:49:00 AM
dorian thank you dear friend for the heartfelt really very beautiful comment bless you
Date: 11/9/2014 3:58:00 PM
simply outstanding in its form and beauty:-) a 7 from me too:-) hugs Jan xx
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/9/2014 4:32:00 PM
trying out new styles of writing jan smiling wonderful comment dear pal bless you
Date: 11/9/2014 2:27:00 PM
Liam . . . Most Excellent here Mate!! The Leprechaun Choir is Chanting: "Give Old Liam a '7' on this." May your green eyes keep sparkling!! Best!! Gary
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/9/2014 2:39:00 PM
oh the teddies eyes just lit up emerald flashing like headlights lol wonderful comment pal deeply appreciated gary ha ha
Date: 11/9/2014 1:51:00 PM
An outstanding poem..Radiant and beautiful!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/9/2014 2:07:00 PM
thank you charmaine dear friend truly extremely beautiful comment heartfelt bless you pal
Date: 11/9/2014 11:17:00 AM
A masterful and inspiring write Liam. I am honored to be the first to comment. 7 all the way.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/9/2014 11:25:00 AM
smiling richard just trying out a different styles dear friend thank you for the outstanding beautiful comment wishing you a blessed sunday

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