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Why are we so afraid to fall in love, When our heart we ware deep in our souls Comes from a place with roads of gold. We try our best to not get attached Like a band of Velcro laced on our backs But when it comes down to it a life of pain The one we loved left us in the rain. We buy gifts to replace the hurt When we all know love won't come in a shirt We move forward or so we think Till the next person comes in to make us weak Putting all our trust in them won't ever be Because that first love we had we must defeat Its not fair to the next to feel our wrath of hurt But we seem to come off like a jerk If we chose to love and this we do Make sure this love will remain true No better days will make you smile And to insure your love they will walk that mile Keep God on your hearts He will never fail And till next time I wish you well.

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Date: 12/20/2014 3:17:00 PM
LAWANDA,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, "WINTER POEMS" in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I look forward to following you and you're poetry:) Enjoy the Christmas Holidays! From: you're new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/20/2014 8:10:00 AM
- Welcome to P - Soup !!!! .... A Christmas smile two you :) - I wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/17/2014 6:47:00 PM
love the imagery especially of the velcro - awesome - we are scared to fall in love for fear of getting hurt and rejected - and we don't always get it right first time - really loved this write:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/18/2014 2:43:00 AM
aww welcome to the site - read as widely as you can and comment on the works of others and hopefully they will comment back - I only started writing in February - it has changed my life!!! hugs Jan xxx
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Lawanda Davis
Date: 12/17/2014 7:53:00 PM
Thanx Jan i really appreciate your comment, first poem on poetry soup. Thank you for the comment. :)

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