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Deep Thoughts

My thoughts fly out like ashes from a fire.... The smoke is my dreams when cold and tired... The heat is my breath to blow out this scene.... So now the ashes flicker to where I've been....

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Tara Jennings

Date: 2/25/2011 6:56:00 PM

ashes of the life we burned.......... or the the self life burned?

Jo Bien

Date: 9/25/2010 11:21:00 AM

good insight in very few words...I like your work, Michael JB

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/20/2010 2:16:00 PM

Very visual ..vivid.. imaginative .. impressive expression of intensity and passion to me... enjoyed W.K. your forever Jersey Girl...luv..

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/19/2010 2:16:00 PM

That flicker carries a lot with it hey Michael? Deep thought provoking and you did it with such finesse. A favorite of mine ;)

Skat A

Date: 9/19/2010 2:00:00 PM

HELLO~ MICHAEL ~ENJOYED YOUR ~ POEM ONE MORE ~He HE HE! Here I find myself all over the soup again. Stopping by to read more poems, before my KIDS make me log out. I had a really nice time reading and catching up with you guys. I posted a sad poem as well, hope you find time to read my latest poem*luv~SKAT

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/19/2010 8:29:00 AM

What nice imagery you have employed to express your deep thoughts, Michael

Gert W. Knop

Date: 9/19/2010 4:08:00 AM

NIcely written, my friend! Well penned imagery, enjoyed!...Gert

Gordon Hickman

Date: 9/19/2010 3:24:00 AM

Great stuff Michael, this is my kind of verse, love it! Gordon, (hicky)

Deb Wilson

Date: 9/18/2010 7:45:00 PM

This shows you know yourself well and are human..enjoyed it Michael..Take care~Deb

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/18/2010 10:42:00 AM

OOOOO'''' Michael, your thoughts are full of life and it's wonder. Your journey of reality is well stuck with all your deep thoughts. It's a sad emotion when ashes leave behind stain that are not forgotten. I love the talent in your words Michael, i hope it all burned off already, and you are enjoying life with out having all them deep thoughts. :-)Unless if the thoughts are of taking over the world. Oh! Michael, i am being silly there at the end. Love your poem. Smiles to you,..p.d.

Myishia Williams

Date: 9/18/2010 10:41:00 AM

i like this