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Deep Space

The way was quadrivial,  
Night time darkness not trivial

Yet, filled with mystical star light
Breaking forth within our sight

The sun was merely a pericope 
Of an entire universe for all to see
Astonishing ligures by night
a reservoir of magic in our flight

Unbelievable we ventured on
the beauty of space a winter song

July 8, 2013

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  1. Date: 7/27/2013 1:21:00 PM
    Julie,.... Congratulations, in the any subject contest... have yourself a sweet day... LINDA

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 1:00:00 AM
    Congratulations ......Seren

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 7:55:00 PM
    Lovely poem congrats on your win Julie xxx

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 6:34:00 PM
    julie, , Congratulations on your awesome win. love ~ SKAT~ ...

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 6:52:00 AM
    Beautiful, congratulations.

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 3:44:00 AM
    lovely couplet Julie Congrats on your win in my contest ty for entering my contest Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 7/10/2013 4:10:00 PM
    I had to look up the words 'quadrivial' (concerning space and time?) and 'ligures' (a biblical reference?) Astonishing vocabulary woven into a thing of pure beauty - Tim

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 1:43:00 PM
    Nice couplets and imagery, particularly the last couplet...magic.