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Deep Sea Fantasy

Far below the rippling surface I find the quiet calm I seek Filtered light enchants me Gentle touch upon my cheek In Neptune's arms I'm cradled His watery realm so dark and deep His subjects glide beside me Safely I close my eyes and sleep My hair drifts with the tide A seaweed curtain hides my face Lost in this my ocean dreams Forever floating in this magical place Mermaids and their siren songs Pirate ships and sunken treasure Fantasy and imaginations reign Abandon me in dreamlike pleasure

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/10/2012 6:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Gautami's contest Barbara. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/6/2012 6:13:00 PM
you make it seem very pleasurable, Barbara. Congrats on this beautiful poem's win.
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Date: 4/6/2012 6:00:00 PM
an exoctic tale of old..I love the stories of the silkies! Light & Love
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Date: 4/6/2012 12:26:00 PM
Wonderful images Barbara, and deserved of your win in this fine contest. Have a lovely weekend :)
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Date: 4/6/2012 11:48:00 AM
Dear LNC, you and I had similar approaches to this contest, but your last verse is utterly amazing. Beautiful description throughout. Is there room for me n Neptune's arms? I've been trying to call you, dear. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/6/2012 2:41:00 AM
Congratulations Barbara a beautiful piece xx
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Date: 4/6/2012 1:23:00 AM
congrats BG on another amazing write and win for a delightful contest luv.. happy easter blessings..too..
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Date: 4/5/2012 3:51:00 PM
Loved the beautiful touch and the magical feel you gave to this deep sea poem. Many Congratulations on your win and thank you so much for supporting my contest. love, gautami
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Date: 4/4/2012 12:52:00 PM
Very nice poem/picture. Good luck in the contest.
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