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Deep Sea - Alouette

Deep sea Alouetee Deeper into sea, On exploring spree, Courage will take you afar, Drifting with the tides, Waters on all sides, You will be a shooting star! Enjoy swimming scent, Opposite current, Adventure bound to raise spark Life a head on game, Play cards well to fame, Rise high as flight of skylark ! Written September 4th, 2014 For contest ' A lovely Alouetee (revised) by Andrea Dietrich Ranked 9th

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Date: 9/15/2014 4:12:00 PM
Hi,Dr. Upma. I really liked the first verse of this one. Congrats in my contest!
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Date: 9/15/2014 4:10:00 PM
This is a lovely write filled with positivity. It takes courage and determination to move ahead and make your dreams come true! Congratulations Upma!! // paul
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Date: 9/15/2014 3:19:00 PM
Dr. Sharma you stun me with the beauty you portray in your poetry. I love the thoughts you put in this. Beautiful. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/15/2014 1:48:00 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Dr Sharma:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/15/2014 8:06:00 AM
Nice work Dr Upma..a fun contest...congrats. BG
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Date: 9/15/2014 8:05:00 AM
Nice work Dr Upma..a fun contest...congrats. BG
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Date: 9/15/2014 7:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! The sea has a special beauty beyond compare which you share in your poem.
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Date: 9/5/2014 1:47:00 AM
Dear Dr. Upma, only those who cherish adventure dare to swim "opposite current." How wonderful it is to reap the rewards of such an endeavor. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/5/2014 1:05:00 AM
Good luck in the contest, Dr. Upma. I enjoyed your fresh poem. Love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 9/4/2014 9:35:00 AM
enjoyed the rich impressions of your artwords, dr. upma...best wishes!.. huggs
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Date: 9/4/2014 4:27:00 AM
great imagery and I love the fact you mentioned the skylark - brilliant! good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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