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Deck Time At Night

sitting on my deck at night watching the stairs shine bright light fathers day has come and gone a great day indeed , however not long being a dad can be hard but seems very worth it while chilling in the yard planes fly over head with a subtle roar birds sit on the fence waiting to soar I'm weary and tired , sitting in my chair wondering what tomorrow will bear sleep will soon come and I will rest at night getting the energy for tomorrows daylight

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Date: 6/23/2016 10:22:00 PM
Andrew, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/20/2016 2:42:00 AM
Andrew, well done... Welcome aboard. Skat
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