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Decimal Point

Its just a small mark on a page A speck, a period, a black dot But it wields inordinate power No matter if we like it or not.... We're taught its really a place holder It can determine a little or a lot A single dime can turn into10 bucks With a flick in just the right spot.... Careers have been made with the dot Some people study on just how to use Years spent making marks on a page Its a wonder their mind they don't lose.... To separate their cents from a dollar Some countries use the old comma If it works , I say just go for it I don't get all the decimal drama...... So if you think this dot unimportant Nothing much to rattle your brain Just make a mistake in your banking And see your fortune go down the drain.... For the POINT contest...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/25/2011 7:41:00 PM
wow, this is a really good way to discuss a simple thing like a decimal point. WAy to go on your win with this excellent rhyming poem, Barbara. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/25/2011 4:08:00 AM
Congrats Barbara on big win with this 'pointed' creative one. Was away travelling hence delay in wishing. Luv / Best wishes Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 1/21/2011 3:58:00 PM
Very Original !!!~great word!!!~Congrats~Rick
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Date: 1/21/2011 3:23:00 PM
A unique illustration of a "point"! Great job Barbara!! Congratulations!!
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Date: 1/21/2011 1:05:00 PM
so good to see your great placment in the contest Barbara.
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Date: 1/21/2011 12:17:00 PM
Hi Barbara - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Paula's contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 1/21/2011 11:47:00 AM
Congrats BG on your wonderful win in Paula's contest with this extraordinary entry .. u sure made the point.. enjoy another char topper .. and happy weekend too...
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Date: 1/21/2011 10:21:00 AM
Congrats, Barb. Excellent piece. Well deserved win. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 1/21/2011 9:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Barbara in the "What's The Point" contest by Paula Swanson. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/20/2011 5:35:00 PM
Barbara,thanks fr your kind commentson EVEREST-ALTITUDE WITH ALTITUDE.I found this poem very witty but very true to life,Well done for sharing.
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Date: 1/13/2011 9:55:00 AM
A cute entry for the contest. It appears you have all the pieces of the puzzle together for this one.
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Date: 1/13/2011 12:38:00 AM
Believe me, dear LNC, I keep my eye on those decimal points! Definitely the best entry I've seen for the contest. Highly creative and witty as well. Wishing success for you. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/12/2011 11:56:00 PM
Ha-Ha I see your "point" with regard to money. this is an original approach to the contest. Absolutely no inspiration has come to me for this theme but I don't think this one can be beat. Did you mean to start the last line with "and"? Good luck, not that you'll need it. Best to you, Diane
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Date: 1/12/2011 8:35:00 PM
I like your decimal point. very creative
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Date: 1/12/2011 8:31:00 PM
Oh how true this is, forget the dot and one will pay, i love this informative poem. Harry
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