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Deception - One Liners Contest

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I was blinded by your words - I wish I’d read between the lines Contest: One Liners Sponsor: Silent One 4th December 2015

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Grace Mutindi

Date: 12/7/2015 9:01:00 AM

Hi Allison...true that all that glitters isn't gold. Congrats on your win!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/7/2015 11:14:00 AM

Thanks Grace:-) hugs jan xx

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/6/2015 7:41:00 PM

A good one, Jan! Congratulations on your win. Janice

Jan Allison
Date: 12/7/2015 1:11:00 AM

Many thanks Janice:-) hugs Jan xx

Judy Konos

Date: 12/6/2015 7:44:00 AM

Congratulations! A fine win indeed!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/6/2015 9:08:00 AM

Thanks Judy:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Merryman

Date: 12/5/2015 10:11:00 PM

Well done, Jan! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Jan Allison
Date: 12/6/2015 5:24:00 AM

Thanks Kim:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Michael Tor

Date: 12/5/2015 7:07:00 PM

Very clever Jan. Congratulations on your win.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/5/2015 7:13:00 PM

Thanks Michael:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/5/2015 6:41:00 PM

BIG congrats, my friend!! I think I will never finish here tonight!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/5/2015 6:42:00 PM

I know the feeling:-) hugs Jan xx

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 12/5/2015 5:57:00 PM

Congratulations Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/5/2015 6:00:00 PM

Thanks Nayda:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 12/5/2015 12:04:00 PM

Jan... Lovely win.... Love Skat

Jan Allison
Date: 12/5/2015 12:05:00 PM

Thanks Skat:-) hugs Jan x

Curtis Johnson

Date: 12/5/2015 11:52:00 AM

Good work Jan. Congrats on your win. Curtis.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/5/2015 11:58:00 AM

Thanks Curtis:-) hugs jan xx

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 12/5/2015 11:19:00 AM

Good work as usual. this is very clever. congrats. BG

Jan Allison
Date: 12/5/2015 11:20:00 AM

Thanks Barbara:-) hugs Jan xx

Balveen Cheema

Date: 12/5/2015 10:39:00 AM

Congrats Jan on your placement!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/5/2015 10:40:00 AM

Thanks Balveen:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 12/5/2015 9:04:00 AM

It's true, Jan, but some things never show up till it's too late. So, no blaming yourself...we are not mind readers or fortune tellers! Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 12/5/2015 9:30:00 AM

So true Paul:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/5/2015 9:01:00 AM

Stopping back to congratulate you on your fine win, Jan! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 12/5/2015 9:29:00 AM

Thanks Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx

Edward Ebbs

Date: 12/5/2015 9:01:00 AM

Nice, congrats!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/5/2015 9:30:00 AM

Thanks Ed:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/5/2015 8:25:00 AM

Jan, congratulations on your awesome win:-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 12/5/2015 9:29:00 AM

Thanks Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 12/5/2015 8:17:00 AM

Jan,great line I still have not learned that one. Congratulations on your win!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/5/2015 9:29:00 AM

Think we all get deceived at some time in our lives Eve:-( hugs jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 12/5/2015 7:41:00 AM

happens more often than we care to admit, great one liner and win Jan ;)

Jan Allison
Date: 12/5/2015 7:54:00 AM

Oh sadly it does Cas and by the ones we least expect:-( hugs jan xx

Susan Gentry

Date: 12/5/2015 6:56:00 AM

I like this... Congrats on contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/5/2015 7:53:00 AM

Thanks Susan:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/4/2015 7:31:00 PM

Good one, Jan. It's exactly how we feel when we have been deceived.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/4/2015 7:32:00 PM

It is Andrea - I wrote this about a month ago - now is the ideal time to post it:-) hugs jan xx

Caycay Jennings

Date: 12/4/2015 3:50:00 PM

We have all wished this, at least I have. Well said! CayCay

Jan Allison
Date: 12/4/2015 3:51:00 PM

I think we all have been taken in with sweet words CayCay:-( hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/4/2015 2:48:00 PM

This is great, Jan! Very powerful one liner! Wish you all the best for the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 12/4/2015 2:52:00 PM

Thanks Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 12/4/2015 8:37:00 AM

so very true, Jan... and g'luck to you.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/4/2015 8:50:00 AM

Sadly it is so true Lin:-( hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/4/2015 5:09:00 AM

right on the dot, jan... remarkable write!.huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 12/4/2015 7:06:00 AM

Thanks Nette:-) hugs Jan xx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/4/2015 2:27:00 AM

To see between the lines is always wise,though when we trust someone so much ,sometimes we believe all they say without searching deeper.Love this sweet Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/4/2015 3:12:00 AM

Oh so true Charma and it is so easy to be taken in by sweet words:-( hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/3/2015 11:59:00 PM

Very deep, ummm reading between the lines, I can see how that could really help in some cases!! Hugs!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/4/2015 3:12:00 AM

Yes definitely Arthur :-( I wrote this about a month ago:-( hugs jan xx