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December Magic

luminescent snow dressed in pewter, tulle, moonshine chilling the rooftop as December magic warms ... long shivers of twilight's kiss Andrea Dietrich’s A Quintain Christmas Contest 12/28/2014

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Roy Jerden

Date: 1/7/2015 8:15:00 AM

Beautiful language, as always... Congratulations, Nette!

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 1/5/2015 5:18:00 AM

translucent with light Nette congrats on win hugs

John Lawless

Date: 1/4/2015 9:50:00 PM

Congrats on the win Nette, the "luminescent snow" conjured up the cold full moon in a frigid sky.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/4/2015 7:02:00 PM

ahhh tulle! ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/4/2015 5:34:00 PM

Nette, Congratulations on your win. Luv ~LINDA~

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/4/2015 5:14:00 PM

Ohhh love the "dressed in pewter, tulle, moonshine "..... indeed if that isn't December magic itself !! So lovely, Nette!

Jan Allison

Date: 1/4/2015 3:55:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) Hugs Jan x

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 1/4/2015 3:35:00 PM

congratulations Nette on this fine poem and win

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/4/2015 3:03:00 PM

Nette, congratulations on your great win for your lovely December Magic poem. Your words were indeed magical! Hugs, Sandra

Paul Callus

Date: 1/4/2015 2:58:00 PM

Lovely imagery and a magical feeling it emits! Congratulations on this excellent win, Nette! #7 // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/4/2015 2:23:00 PM

Gorgeous, Nette!! Big congrats in my contest. One of the prettiest poems entered.

Daver Austin

Date: 12/31/2014 9:19:00 AM

A chilling, but beautiful view from the rooftop. Happy New Year, dear friend. Love, daver

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/31/2014 5:42:00 AM

Brilliant! Happy New Year, dear Nette!

Norma Arana

Date: 12/29/2014 4:07:00 PM

The turn of images as this heavenly poem ends is inimitable." Long shivers of twilight's kiss" -- stellar, Nette!

David Meade

Date: 12/29/2014 11:04:00 AM

Cold and warmth dance in your poem and fill me with desire -- for more of your wonderful words.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/29/2014 8:24:00 AM

Simply sublime Nette - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx

Gary Bateman

Date: 12/29/2014 6:48:00 AM

A very nice Tanka Nette!! Great imagery. Best of Luck in Andrea's Contest. A "7" from me. Best Holiday Wishes, Gary

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 12/29/2014 5:46:00 AM

Excellent pen Nette! I really enjoyed your piece my dearest friend! A 7 from me! I wish you a very Happy New Year! I pray that 2015 brings just the best to you! Have a very lovely day! GL in the contest! :) Love and hugs! xxx D."