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Debt

And why this curse was placed on me base of hallow lands and why it fell with so much glee from lace of someone's hands to follow me from crib to grave to gut me once and yet to taunt to covet me into a slave a ghost appears but not to haunt to tell a tale this apparition to show me pain without regret to settle me, not the rendition of a man that no one's met for like the tree I'm in the forest but unlike them, I can't be heard and for my lot I should be sorest because I've lived in the absurd I scramble now from fear to sadness looking for my days gone bye and once they swore that I was the badness as they told me not to cry And in myself I still believe him perched upon his safety net but I have given more than one limb I have paid his endless debt

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/28/2016 7:57:00 PM
Thanks Teddy!
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Date: 7/28/2016 5:30:00 PM
Congrats Timothy, for having your piece featured in the Poetry Soup homepage!! ;-)
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Date: 7/27/2016 9:52:00 PM
A sad story. Good rhymes and potential.
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Timothy Barry
Date: 7/28/2016 1:56:00 PM
Thanks Tom, nice to get comments.
Date: 3/31/2016 12:29:00 PM
Really nice write.....
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Date: 3/25/2016 11:58:00 PM
to tell a tale this... I so enjoyed. Sounds like you've given more than expected, and somehow it might not be enough... love the write. LINDA
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Date: 3/25/2016 9:00:00 PM
Tremendous write.
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Timothy Barry
Date: 3/25/2016 10:13:00 PM
Thanks Lenny! I really appreciate your comments.
Date: 3/12/2016 7:04:00 PM
Use the forms section, I have learned tons from trying new forms. You already have skills.
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Timothy Barry
Date: 3/12/2016 10:22:00 PM
Thanks for that Richard I really have no idea what Im doing, but I like it. I'll check it.

Book: Shattered Sighs