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Death's Breath

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Death's Breath

Twilight hours brought devil remarks Evil sleeps within the pumpkins What terror comes forth and embarks When the fierce nature of one’s sins Corrodes the fabric of times skins Screams are displayed, a tale of hate Having pains which you can’t relate Symbols of horror shown forward Death breathing on you it’s your fate Shows Halloween’s presence inward
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  1. Date: 9/28/2012 9:03:00 PM
    EXCITING AND SCARY TO INVOLVE A HOLIDAY MOOD WITH TERRIFIC LINES OF IMAGERY SO SUPERLATIVE AND VISIONS TO BEWARE RUSSELL LUV .. ANOTHER SPOOKY GREAT WRITE TO ENTICE US INTO HALLOWEEN MODE .. FANTASTIC WORK MY FRIEND ..

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 4:49:00 PM
    Okay interesting work..That would be a very unhappy life to have death breathing on one..Thanks for stopping by and yes, that is about as dark as I would get..Sara

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 2:10:00 PM
    Russell, sometimes I think that you feel halloween is evil but other times you think of it as fun. I bet in reality it's all just fun for you, my friend. Though this one certainly touches on the evil side!!