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Death of a Flower

sweet scented night bloom white and pure crushed in my hand what pain waits the dawn 01/13/16

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/27/2016 7:10:00 PM

I ADORE this one. Congrats, Ralph

James Inman
Date: 1/27/2016 8:31:00 PM

...and I adore you, Andrea, thank you.

Susan Gentry

Date: 1/27/2016 2:10:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this profound monoku... Love your imagery!

James Inman
Date: 1/27/2016 6:51:00 AM

Thank you for the wonderful comment.

Paul Callus

Date: 1/26/2016 1:28:00 PM

A mixture of sweet and sour, James! Congrats on your fine win. Regards // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 1/26/2016 3:14:00 PM

Building it haiku style is a good idea, but using less words can work out well, too.

James Inman
Date: 1/26/2016 2:50:00 PM

Thanks for the visit Paul, trying to get that Haiku twist.

Skat A

Date: 1/26/2016 11:24:00 AM

JAMES, Congrats on your monoku win. LOVE ** SKAT **

James Inman
Date: 1/26/2016 12:11:00 PM

Thank you SKAT

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/25/2016 12:20:00 PM

Congrats for your win with this beautiful poem my friend,bl

James Inman
Date: 1/25/2016 12:37:00 PM

Thank you BL.

Balveen Cheema

Date: 1/25/2016 7:05:00 AM

A perfumed win! Congrats James!

James Inman
Date: 1/25/2016 7:29:00 AM

Thanks Balveen, Twice! LOL

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/24/2016 8:48:00 PM

James, thank you for supporting my contest. Stop by my latest blog "FINALLY, WE WON" if you'd like. Take Care. LINDA --

James Inman
Date: 1/25/2016 5:28:00 AM

Thanks for hosting a great contest, PD. Let me read the rest and I'll see you on your Blog.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 1/19/2016 5:45:00 AM

Blows me away - the meaning I took from it, blows me away - I loved it. Excellent ... CayCay

James Inman
Date: 1/19/2016 8:05:00 AM

Thank you CayCay.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 1/14/2016 7:31:00 AM

Struck my the last few words..... mmmmmn luck in the contest James I.~Olive Eloisa =`)

James Inman
Date: 1/14/2016 4:15:00 PM

Thanks for reading, Olive.