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Death Is Knocking At My Door

What is this, What is this-- A Barrier to me!? Why, something so silly-- Don't you know Living is a Tease, Life is pain I am the Ease. My message is one of release-- Don't you know... Wherever I go, You will follow Death is knocking at my door 5/24/'13 (For all those who lost their lives in the tornado in Oklahoma City, I pray their end was quick.)

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Toshia Hall

Date: 7/9/2013 1:24:00 PM

Wow.

Gabe Shelly
Date: 7/9/2013 4:33:00 PM

Thanks. g.

Madelin Barton

Date: 6/9/2013 6:52:00 PM

Hi Gabe great poem my friend.

Gabe Shelly
Date: 6/9/2013 9:40:00 PM

Thanks again. It means a lot, coming from a person whose poem I have also critiqued. But don't be afraid to throw some criticism in there.

John Posey

Date: 6/1/2013 7:59:00 PM

Gabe, this one is special.... Any poet can recognize one that came from the heart. You had no choice. I believe this was one you had to right. Great Job, my friend.... Jake

Gabe Shelly
Date: 6/1/2013 10:20:00 PM

Thanks, and you are right, it did come from somewhere deep-- please keep reading. gabe

Kim Morrison

Date: 6/1/2013 12:17:00 PM

Interesting tribute! Nice Write! Kim

Gabe Shelly
Date: 6/1/2013 7:53:00 PM

Thank-you, please read on. gabe

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/25/2013 10:01:00 AM

Hello Gabe, wow... i love this... you can't hide or run from the hooded door. pain will always grows, so will the numbers in question. I hate what happen in Oklahoma, sad it is... nothing we can do or say, can change such faith... the message is thick,, and so is death... xox~ Linda

Gabe Shelly
Date: 5/25/2013 12:33:00 PM

Thank you for reading gabe