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Death Fall

Egg shells litter the nests bottom forlorn thoughts drift on the summer’s haze the nest crushed beneath the wheel of the mower still retained its circular form. High in the small woods I had created in the back yard bird song could be heard. The birds hidden by the abundant foliage chittered away. Were they the newborn from this nest? impossible to tell, one could hope. So many broken nests, so many lost children, so much rampant neglect and disregard nature was a true leveler. Reference: Chris Aechtner’s Verse Closer – line 1 eggshells Example for the REFRENCE CONTEST

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Date: 6/27/2013 10:05:00 AM
"broken nests, lost children" Nice combination...good symbolism here
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Date: 6/26/2013 8:38:00 AM
wonderfully done Debbie
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Date: 6/25/2013 11:52:00 PM
Nature is a true leveller. Well said
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Date: 6/24/2013 11:01:00 AM
i like the detailed attention of a fall in a slow motion kind of way...lingering, lingering beauty.. thank you for allowing me to express my self in your being contest; much appreciated, debbie..:) huggs
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Date: 6/24/2013 10:30:00 AM
Great work debbie. your last stanza says it all. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla
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Date: 6/23/2013 7:12:00 AM
Lovely poem here mam .......... :)
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Date: 6/23/2013 1:50:00 AM
awesome poem! matured minds really comfort us. their tunes are great tonics.Glory
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Date: 6/22/2013 8:35:00 PM
Deb, it's not Buddhism, it's Hinduism..The lines you quoted are famous ones..the message in this poem of yours is great, that's what we witness in the Himalayas now, literally, with thousands trapped there, how abt one on that for the referential , sort of referring to the reference, thnx for stopping by !! Jag
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Date: 6/22/2013 5:28:00 PM
wow, this is an awesome example. How nonchalant nature can be! Love those kinds of poems, Deb.
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