Death, Death and More Death

death death and more death will there ever be better time to start and see what went wrong with us from first time we thought would never happen to us that is when it did two people were dead not doing anything wrong on an interview why oh why oh why should such a thing have happened young not in their prime could never guess why killer had done such a thing to ever happen bring them back to us now but know it is too late to see them again death death and more death hope one day it all did end a problem no more Don't know any better way that I could ever say it better then this. Them we will so sadly miss. Not in haiku but meant what I said. I did not capitalize God in order to maintain haiku consistency. Could never have put in a word cameraman anywhere. Replaced it with word person. I understand that haiku is not supposed to have punctuation or capitalism. Is this correct? Not sure about verb tenses in second to last stanza.Is this correct? Smoothness doesn't always seem to be an attribute of haiku. Jim Horn