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Dear You

You, Dear, Own me Heart and soul Body and Spirit. My love is yours for the taking; Openly and freely, I gave you them long ago When you took my hand, and we promised before all to honor and cherish forever. Forever will never be long enough to return the Heart Joys your love created within me, nor to express all that is in my heart. (last line is too long for one line here) This is a first attempt at the form.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/18/2015 1:28:00 PM
- Hope he will love this, dear Janet :) - It is beautifully - I wish you a wonderful weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/19/2015 1:38:00 AM
Yes he will see it. Thanks. Hugs ~Janet
Date: 4/18/2015 1:10:00 PM
I hope you print this out for him Janet it is delightful! hugs jan xxx 7 xxx
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/19/2015 1:37:00 AM
Jan he does read them every so often, or sometimes he finds them in pockets, under his pillow, in a drawer...lol.

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