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Dear Super Friend

Dear super friend of mine you feel Everywhere I feel you improve zeal. Heal my ill mind oh dear super light Giving wisdom ever you do me bright. Fight I with night of life to see a day I know hearing me attention you pay. I pray and urge you within devotion, You observe my mind within emotion. Connection has happened in this Earth I understand purpose of life and birth. You show me path I mingle in you ever, Oh dear super friend I forget you never.

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Date: 3/19/2017 8:51:00 AM
A very uplifting first write.
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Date: 1/22/2017 2:57:00 AM
Wonderful esteem!
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Date: 9/16/2016 12:03:00 PM
Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love
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Pintu Mahakul
Date: 1/15/2017 6:30:00 PM
Thank you very much for your kind feedback.
Date: 9/15/2016 11:35:00 PM
PINTU, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Pintu Mahakul
Date: 9/16/2016 11:41:00 AM
Thank you very much for reviewing this poem. I am glad finding you as new poetrysoup friend. May God bring lots of happiness for you.

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