Dear Mom

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~Dear Mom~ (Couplet) Mom,I miss your smiling face Your loving voice and embrace You're considerate and kind You are everyday in my mind Dear mom, it's you I do miss I send you a hug and a kiss You give me your tender love Which comes from God above I can't ever thank you enough For all the love you've shown me Grateful for all the things Through the years you've given me Dear mom, I miss your loving face No other love can ever take your place. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2015 May.10.2015 This is a heartfelt Mothers Day dedication to my very dear Mum and all the Moms in the world:)

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 5/24/2015 12:54:00 AM

This is a heartfelt tribute to your Mom and to all of the mothers out there... Another lovely poem from you, Dorian!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 5/13/2015 8:12:00 AM

A great tribute to Mom. Happy Mother's Day.Love sweet D.,,,,R

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 5/21/2015 7:43:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Rajat,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem and all.Very much appreciate it dear friend.Youre very kind.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you!:)D.

James Peranteau

Date: 5/11/2015 11:32:00 AM

So sweet dear poet ! Wow, your mom really impressed you; how beautiful ! Have a blessed week......much love, james

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 5/21/2015 7:50:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly James, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very much appreciate it dear friend.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you!:)D.

Poesy Relish

Date: 5/11/2015 3:48:00 AM

Nice tribute.. happy mothers day Dorian.. nad

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 5/21/2015 8:22:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Nad,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very much appreciated dear friend.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you!:)D.

Tim Smith

Date: 5/10/2015 9:20:00 PM

A beautiful tribute Dorian...Happy Mother's Day ...Tim

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 5/23/2015 3:35:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly Tim, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very much appreciate.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you!:) D.