Dead Once Killed

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Inspired by Shadow Hamilton's "Through Their Eyes" contest. (Too long to enter.)

Killed the ***** killed her dead dead she is dead to me me and you me I know know the truth know her lies lies she told lies and pain pain she caused pain I felt felt her rage felt her hate hate for me hate she made made me hurt made me ache ache inside ache for you you to die you I'll end end this pain end your life life with you life I hate hate for you hate you've made made me think made me try try to leave try to hide hide from you hide my spite spite of life spite and knife knife you had knife I took took from you took to use use to stab use on you you I hate you my love love for you love you've killed killed the ***** killed her dead dead ***** 07/31/16

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Jan Allison

Date: 8/3/2016 12:06:00 PM

Gosh this is a dark write James - i wrote a poem based on the contest but couldn't write about a pre meditated murder:-( hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 8/3/2016 5:10:00 PM

http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/inspired_by_through_your_eyes_contest_812972 Its inspired by the contest but I couldn't write for the contest on a murder theme at the moment:-( hugs Jan xx

James Inman
Date: 8/3/2016 1:10:00 PM

What's your poem's title. I looked but couldn't find it. I did find some others I enjoyed. Yes this is a dark one based on nothing but the theme of Shadow's contest, I promise.