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Dead -- a Senryu Series

Shall I stand alone In the silhouette of death The furnace of hell The unbeliever! Wash my soul, with hell's fire Live among : damned If I had been True To Christ, my Higher Power I could live in “Light” Lenore beside me For eons of Forever I am lost : Alone Evil owns my Soul Darkness, my Forever life Ignited in Death A word of advise : Live your life with-in “HIS” Love Know Eternal “ LIFE “

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/7/2011 9:14:00 PM
I think if Steven Spielburg gave it a whirl he could make a full length movie out of your poem....Very interesting from Act 1 to THE END..... Thank you...
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Date: 3/7/2011 1:54:00 PM
Lovely devotional thoughts you have penned so well in the last Senryu
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Date: 3/7/2011 8:19:00 AM
Very sad, HG. But you do provide good advice in the last verse. I hope you are doing well. You sure have had a lot of contest success, but I haven't heard from you lately. Take care, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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