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Dazed and Confused

I'm dazed and confused I really am in control Am I who I am No answer was my reply Schizophrenia deepens http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/life-14.php

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/8/2011 7:00:00 AM

Nicely defined Schizophrenia with its symptoms, James

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/8/2011 4:56:00 AM

Quite an ironic piece James, you actually portray the confusion brilliantly in this write.. :) Hope your week's been a good one. Have fun this weekend :-)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/7/2011 8:42:00 PM

Perfection James in this piece.. short and to the point of the matter.. expressive to impress the reader luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/7/2011 3:42:00 PM

If you really did have schizophrenia, you would probably hear an answer. Cool poem, James. Quite thought provoking! Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/7/2011 12:34:00 PM

james, haven;t heard form you in a while... how are you?? i like the tonality and word behavior of this semi-dark yet beautiful piece! sooo lovely..:) huggs, nette