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Days Like These

What to do on days like these , Loaf around or stand under autumn trees, On a rainy day , to stand under trees ? Makes sense as much does talking to fallen leaves , What to do on days like these ? Days like these are the heartbreaker's gamble , To the heartbroken the rains too must not show mercy .. When you know to them forecasts are what matter, you can spend a monsoon day as you please ..

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Date: 9/16/2014 5:47:00 PM
Tejkiran,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/14/2014 8:31:00 AM
Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Tejkiran - I choose your first great written free verse - You write skillfully - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Tejkiran Bhullar
Date: 9/20/2014 2:38:00 PM
Hey ! Thanks ! I am learning to use poetry soup ! :-)

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