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Days End

Strolling through the dark woods night approaching as the sun sets the shadows were now lengthening casting weird shapes on the floor Birds pass on their way to roost all are now settling for the night squabbles from the rooks over perches rabbits emerging from burrows to eat This pause between daytime and night soon the rabbits will be joined by badgers coming out to forage and play night jar starts to sing a real din Later there will be such sweet sounds as the nightingales songs ring out for now this twilight stands in between a world of half light neither day or night Sweet scent of night stocks fill the air as I sit on an old log drinking it in a shadow detaches from the beech trees a fallow deer on her way to the river Now the daylight has completely gone the moon has yet to show its face a hoot carries through the dark the owls glide past searching for prey I sigh as the stars appear above each one twinkling pinpicks of light the sky a canvas on which they shine at last the moon glides into view Another day is finally over and done it is time for me too to head off home carrying with me memories of this time closing the door I shut out the darkness

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Date: 12/25/2013 11:41:00 PM
Merry Christmas Shadow, ,-, I did not want to leave you out of my Happy Jolly Momment.. Sending you a Christmas Carol.... -- Dashing through the snow In a one horse open sleigh O'er the fields we go Laughing all the way Bells on bob tails ring Making spirits bright What fun it is to laugh and sing A sleighing song tonight Oh, jingle bells, jingle bells Jingle all the way Oh, what fun it is to ride In a one horse open sleigh Jingle bells, jingle bells Jingle all the way Oh, what fun it is to ride In a one horse open sleigh HEY! :) <-- You got to love it I do hope you sang with me... Goodnight my friend... LINDA
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Date: 12/27/2013 5:01:00 AM
hi Linda ty what fun 0) Shadow x smile hug
Date: 12/16/2013 2:34:00 PM
very beautifully drawn picture piece dear friend
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Date: 12/27/2013 5:00:00 AM
Liam ty mate Shadow x smile hug
Date: 12/16/2013 5:06:00 AM
This is so well written. I have a dejavu feeling reading it. Is this a repost???
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Date: 12/16/2013 5:55:00 AM
hi Rick no it is a new write. Glad you like it Shadow x smile hug
Date: 12/16/2013 4:57:00 AM
Ahh!! Enjoyed the nature work that you have penned..I could just see the scene minus a few animals that we don't have here..thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 12/16/2013 6:01:00 AM
hi Sara nice to see you. ty for reading and kind comments Shadow x smile hug ps keep strong
Date: 12/15/2013 5:15:00 PM
shadow, lovely portayal of a day leaving.. impressed!... huggs
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/15/2013 6:46:00 PM
hi Nette and ty so much for your super comments Shadow x smile hug

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