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Day One

That first day Emeralds shine, 
reflecting sparkling smiles of mine;

In that moment everything is new,
flawless like a dream come true;

Opening the door to your home,
no more renting its your own; 

Decorating each and every room 
all the style you can consume;

Ready for a meal lets Toast!
Our new life on the Gulf coast.

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  1. Date: 7/7/2013 7:18:00 AM
    Oh nice job...congratulations

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 2:19:00 PM
    this is one cool poem, CONGRATS, love Skat

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 11:33:00 PM
    Melanie, thank you for your day one entry and win... congrats!!! :-) From: Linda

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 9:32:00 PM
    a very xool poem

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