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Dawn's Music

Behind sheer curtains Golden rays sing the day’s pulse Grandeur to the beat of life The ballad bows proud Whistling in rhythm tango Bird’s susurrant calm weeping Hills and valleys hum Sweet fields in lavender shades Under a blue canopy

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P Sheart

Date: 10/4/2009 1:10:00 PM

Hi Laura Congrats on this amazing poem!! Good luck in finals. Love Light Truth Patty

Robin L. Gass

Date: 9/30/2009 4:07:00 PM

Congratulations Laura! You have penned such a beautiful Choka. This fills you with lovely images and a peaceful feeling! Best of luck in the finals! Love, Robin

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/24/2009 1:12:00 PM

Congratulations on making it through the first round of the poetry competition with two poems, Laura! Luck and love, Carolyn

James Fraser

Date: 9/24/2009 12:24:00 PM

Laura, congratulations in getting past round one of the competition >> James

James Marshall Goff

Date: 9/18/2009 7:21:00 PM

great form! great poem! Laura!...jim

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/11/2009 8:25:00 AM

Congrats on your featured write. God Bless Phyl

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 7/11/2009 4:19:00 AM

What a wonderful piece. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing & congratulations on your excelent piece being featured dis week. Great you Laura

Raul Moreno

Date: 7/9/2009 11:48:00 PM

Laura, congrats on your feature...Raul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/8/2009 2:51:00 PM

Love your poem and your descriptive talent. Sara

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/6/2009 3:12:00 PM

Such a beautiful poem, Laura. A wonderful addition to the featured section this week!! :) Carrie

Heidie Buys

Date: 7/6/2009 1:30:00 PM

Such a peaceful and gentle poem. Congratulations on being featured this week. love Heidie

James Fraser

Date: 7/6/2009 11:10:00 AM

Congratulations on your featured poem, lovely poem Laura>>James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/6/2009 6:55:00 AM

Beautiful picture you painted here with your words Laura. Congratulations on your featured poem this week. May you have many more. Love, Carol

Brian Strand

Date: 7/5/2009 11:27:00 PM

Congrats on your feature poem this week Laura.Rgds Brian

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 7/5/2009 10:44:00 PM

This is a beautiful, amazing and inspiring work deserve to be displayed. Congratulations. Ernilando

Jayne Eggins

Date: 7/5/2009 7:33:00 PM

Lovely write Laura I am a singing teacher and musical poetry gets me everytime ... and congrates on spotlight as well another deserving piece Love Jayne x

Date: 4/29/2009 4:22:00 PM

Beautiful use of imagery for a multi-sense experience. Love the view. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comment on my lanterne. Karen

Farah Chamma

Date: 4/25/2009 1:14:00 AM

A great poem Laura...The images you pen are wonderful...Thank you for sharing.. Always, The young one, Farah