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Dawn

Oh, dawn, Awake us not, We lay in bed, asleep, Embraced – naked, she clings to me, My love...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/15/2015 3:09:00 PM
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Congrats on your placement in my contest..Thanks for your participation..Sara
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Max Corvus
Date: 9/16/2015 7:57:00 AM
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Thanks
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/11/2015 4:50:00 PM
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Congratulations on your win,Max, hugs dear friend Eve
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Max Corvus
Date: 9/16/2015 7:58:00 AM
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Thank you :)
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Skat A
Date: 6/11/2015 3:55:00 PM
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Hi Max, Congratulations........ SKAT
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Max Corvus
Date: 6/11/2015 4:33:00 PM
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Hi again. Thanks for so many comments you've left on my site so far.
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Date: 6/11/2015 2:11:00 PM
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Max, Congratulations on your win. LOVE LINDA"
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Max Corvus
Date: 6/11/2015 4:30:00 PM
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Thanks. Well, honorable mentions isn't actually a win, but fair enough. Love, Max
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/10/2015 10:12:00 PM
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I don't think I've ever seen a sensual cinquain before. Great work! Congrats on your Honorable Mention, Max! Love, Kim
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Max Corvus
Date: 6/11/2015 2:56:00 AM
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Thanks
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/5/2015 9:25:00 AM
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Awww - how sensuously beautiful - an excellent romantic cinquain! Love it and rate it a "7." Pandita
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Skat A
Date: 6/5/2015 1:04:00 AM
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Hi Max, it takes and it gives ones last bite before the sun wakes the soul. Enjoyed the cinquain. SKAT
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Max Corvus
Date: 6/5/2015 1:47:00 AM
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Thenks, please do check your inbox if you have not done it yet. I've a message for you.

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