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Daughter of the Heart

Daughter of The Heart (written from a woman's perspective) When you wondered if we could be friends I wanted the idea to make me glad Yet inside I felt a twinge of sad Part of me felt bad For I know I cannot be I wish to offer something with more substantiality For I know our relationship has much more complexity. My desire is to usher you towards your serenity I want you to know I'm still here Even though you are moving Don't worry or fear To me you will always be dear Listen with your heart not with ears I feel your anxiety and share your tears Let me reflect back your strength like a million mirrors For I have witnessed your amazing all these years You truly are my daughter of the heart Always with me even when we're apart New beginnings are important I celebrate your fresh start Knowing you are strong I'm confident you'll be okay For your happiness I will continue to pray Navigate life's adventure enjoy the music you play travel on ruby slippers Walk amidst the light this way At night bask in moonlit wonder Off beaten paths don't be afraid to stray Shadows evaporate night always gives way to day Tell me about your adventures No detail too small For I will cherish it all Stand tall Follow your heart's call Drink from crystal clear streams Dance in the glow of moonbeams Life can be the stuff of all your dreams

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Constance La France

Date: 3/2/2016 12:36:00 PM

Richard, I found this poem very emotional to read, it made me think so much of my mother, I told her everything ''no detail was too small'', sadly my mother now resides in heaven but in life and in death she always gave me wings to fly, wonderful poem, beautifully penned, I am loving this 7

Constance La France
Date: 3/2/2016 4:24:00 PM

B E A U T I F U L

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/2/2016 1:06:00 PM

Thanks for such a thoughtful visit. I wrote this for my wife as a gift for one of her clients who is moving away. So it is from her perspective.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 2/14/2016 8:30:00 AM

This is a fond look at a departure with a blessing. My own experience (even as a man) is that these partings have an element of pain and sadness as well as the joy and good wishes as you point out. Yes we are glad, and we know it has to be. But time goes by just too fast. It's not easy being a caring parent.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/15/2016 8:28:00 AM

Thanks Duke for your thoughtful words.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/13/2016 6:00:00 PM

Richard, I hold on tight to mine. Wish it was as easy as the voice you share above.... ;) Happy Valentines to you..... XOX ~Love LINDA~

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/15/2016 8:29:00 AM

Happy belated Valentines to you as well Linda. Hugs Rick.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 2/12/2016 4:15:00 PM

It shows the true talent of a poet to be able to write from such a different perspective than your own, this was very moving, and the first person I thought of when you wrote this was Eileen! I see already, she loved it!!! :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/15/2016 8:29:00 AM

You are kind Arthur.

Paul Callus

Date: 2/11/2016 3:34:00 PM

An excellent write, Richard. Straight away my mind clicked on Eileen and her daughter; in fact I scrolled down to see if she had commented, and lo and behold...I was right on all counts:) #7 ~ Regards // paul

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/15/2016 8:30:00 AM

Thanks for the visits and the 7 Paul.

Tim Smith

Date: 2/9/2016 5:47:00 PM

When a child departs it is difficult to change that relationship from parent/ child to friends but when done right it can be spectacular. Well done Richard

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/10/2016 5:22:00 AM

Thanks Tim:0)

Carl Fraser

Date: 2/9/2016 9:40:00 AM

To step into the mind of a Mom relaying a message to her daughter, well that's no easy task my friend but you have painted a vivid picture of that bond with gracious words. So we'll crafted by a truly gifted poet. Blessings brother, Carl

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/9/2016 11:14:00 AM

You are kind, thank you Carl.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 2/8/2016 8:43:00 PM

P.S. Just thought I'd point out, I think you might mean "you're" in the line "For I witness your amazing all these years." ... not to be nit-picking, but just helping :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/8/2016 11:31:00 PM

Thanks Tim, I think I have it right.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 2/8/2016 8:42:00 PM

So wonderfully endearing, and a great tribute, that any daughter (or son) would love to hear from their parents. Love the tone and sincerity.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/8/2016 11:32:00 PM

Much appreciated Tim!

Mama Bear

Date: 2/8/2016 8:02:00 PM

No matter how much we love them we need to let them try their wings It goes for the boys too so it is not one sided ever. Love Mom

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/8/2016 11:33:00 PM

Thanks Mom, I fixed the too! Love ya.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 2/8/2016 11:35:00 AM

Richard....Richard. This is all I want to tell my daughter. Oh...it is priceless. So beautiful...everything I want to express. I'm so touched by this moving piece. She left this morning....she's gone. Her room is empty again...and so is my heart, but she was a bit stronger...and has since messaged me and told me she arrived Ok and she is determined to be happy. Thank you for sharing this.....Bless you for it. I will now read it again...Hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/8/2016 7:53:00 PM

I am in awe of your Gladiator piece, I think it's one of your best.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/8/2016 7:51:00 PM

It's so hard to let our kids go, I think it's even harder for moms. Mary also cried when I read this one to her.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/8/2016 11:37:00 AM

Went through it again...with her in my heart. Teary eyed now. Sweet precious words....

Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/8/2016 11:35:00 AM

Thanks for reading my Where Gladiator's Fought Poem again...You are simply amazing for visiting my older writes, dear.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/8/2016 10:12:00 AM

Life can indeed be challenging for any woman to watch her daughter of the heart fly with those wings...If I ever get to that departing stage from my girl,I wish to be as loving,strong and brave offering a wise advice like this woman you describe..Awesome.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/8/2016 10:23:00 AM

Thanks Charmaine, I'm sure you are an amazing mom!