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Darkness Falls

DARKNESS FALLS darkness falls upon the strong and meek both need the light of the moon and stars and the coyotes howl for more and more through the forested trees near the stream behind doors - illusions of candles and lamps soft cushions, subsistence, safety under lock and key should the winds howl and splinter the wood, shatter the illusion of four walls and floor, and even the score between man and beast - would the meek grow strong with disheveled knees, would the heart of the strong become meat? Kim Rodrigues © 2016

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Date: 11/26/2016 6:40:00 PM
wow, a stark poem with slivers of polarity so well crafted, kim... huggs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/26/2016 9:12:00 PM
Thank you, Nette!
Date: 11/25/2016 7:47:00 PM
oh, my this is very dark and I really like it, Kim!! Love your contrast of man with nature. We are never really safe on this earth!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/25/2016 8:52:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! :)
Date: 11/23/2016 7:17:00 AM
This was fantastic Kim. This is what a poem should look like. This made me think and that is always a good sign to me. What we see in the darkness differs with each set of eyes gazing. Nicely done Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/23/2016 7:49:00 AM
Thank you, Chris!
Date: 11/22/2016 11:40:00 PM
Meaningfully beautiful ... enjoyable metaphors ... nice ...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/23/2016 6:53:00 AM
Thank you, Probir!

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