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Dark Places To Play

by Michael J Falotico My steps are slowing. Sunlight fades as shadows crawl.. Soon covered by night. Dark places to write from where hidden thoughts dance without being seen while they play free.. just having fun with two forms connecting.. an Haiku & Tetractys

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/21/2011 10:47:00 PM

enjoyed your poem.. p.d.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/14/2011 7:50:00 PM

Has a kind of haunting echo to this verse that soothes the mind. A clever verse Michael

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/14/2011 5:01:00 PM

Wow.. I like the idea of having fun with two forms... sounds like a fun little challeng.... how are you? I really miss you and Linda ~marie here on the soup... others don't remember... well I have been off for a bit.. did u get my new poem..I send you.. hope u can work with it.. please please... have a nice one,...p.d.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 8/14/2011 1:35:00 PM

I really enjoyed this, Michael! Sometimes indeed we need those dark places-- cool way to connect these two forms & ohh shucks! The Soup ran out! is there still some dessert left over?? :D hugs your way!

Date: 8/13/2011 7:07:00 PM

Great job on the two forms, yes, the dark likes to come out and play sometimes too. Love Alexa

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/13/2011 5:57:00 PM

Beautiful combination of the two forms, Michael

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/13/2011 3:51:00 PM

I love writing dark but interesting pieces. There's something mystical about them. Thank you for showing us this beautiful work of art!

Dinda Minardi

Date: 8/13/2011 2:17:00 PM

Mysterious piece of your creative writings. Cool one! :)

Joseph Osita

Date: 8/13/2011 12:56:00 PM

Very beautiful! "Sunlight fades as shadows crawl" this line is very picturesque.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/13/2011 11:41:00 AM

hope u don't mind Michael but I attempted to do a combo like this just posted so u inspired this "Sweetheart" with your lovely words .. but u always do luv.. J.G. in blanket mode.. on beach with Venus.. she is so adorable... luv.. forever..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/13/2011 11:26:00 AM

just luv the clandestine atmosphere of this piece and the two forms work very well together Michael luv... we all seem to have those secret coves where true words can exit onto pages expressing inner feelings .. excellent my White Knight as your Jersey Girl prepares to lie in the Sun one more day.. with luv forever and always...

Judy Ball

Date: 8/13/2011 11:23:00 AM

Very nicely done indeed. A bit mysterious. God Bless, JB

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/13/2011 11:07:00 AM

Clever, and rather haunting!! Nice one!!