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Dark Lover

Sleep so deep it never ends
Envelope me
Wrap me in your dark arms
Give me your lovers kiss
Remove me from this house of distorted images
Let me sink into your softness
No one left to disappoint
Not even myself
I wonder
Will you keep your promises?
Are you my inevitable companion?
Do my paths lead to your boudoir?
Will you betray me?
Will I be brought to the gates of hell
by you who masquerades as my lover?
I hold hold myself back 
for a while longer
Allowing myself to be lifted
Seeking light instead
Feeling it's warmth on my face
Renewing my strength
Laughter bubbling from a place long forgotten
Desire to disappear fading
Listen to me singing
Yesterday is not today
I am still me and yet I am far from the same
I now wish to reside in the light
You no longer seduce me
For we were never meant to lovers



For Silent One's Metophor poem contest

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  1. Date: 8/18/2015 5:15:00 PM
    Richard.. Yes, my comments are late.. But I actually want to read the poem first. You master the metaphor in this deserved winner!

  1. Date: 8/10/2015 6:27:00 PM
    RICHARD, :-) Congratulations on your wonderful win! *SKAT*

  1. Date: 8/10/2015 3:22:00 PM
    Awesome use of metaphors !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 8/10/2015 1:36:00 AM
    Congrats on ur awesome winning poem Richard! Exquisite work!

  1. Date: 8/9/2015 9:19:00 PM
    Hi Rick, I love this beautiful write that is so beautiful and touching! I am so happy to see it on the winners list! Congratulations, my friend on your win! Pandita

  1. Date: 8/9/2015 9:40:00 AM
    Lovely poem. Congratulations on your win in my contest. Thank you for taking part.

  1. Date: 7/17/2015 5:25:00 PM
    The DARK TEMPTRESS! Not many men can resist her. Great writing in this piece, Richard. Perhaps you might like my Ballade entitled: Where My True Love Lives. Elaine

  1. Date: 6/16/2015 10:22:00 PM
    Sometimes we have to go further into the darkness to find the light... I enjoyed reading this brilliant piece once again. Congrats on a great win, Rick!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 6/17/2015 9:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Kelly!;0)
  1. Date: 6/13/2015 1:46:00 AM
    Richard.. Back to congratulate on your impressive write and win!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 6/13/2015 7:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks David.
  1. Date: 6/11/2015 4:13:00 PM
    RICHARD, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*

  1. Date: 6/10/2015 7:18:00 PM
    good pen Rick congrats on 2nd place hugs soup-mail

  1. Date: 3/5/2015 2:06:00 AM
    Richard, you mastered this contest with this incredibly dark winner.. Much applause!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 3/5/2015 8:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks David, I humbly accept.
  1. Date: 2/28/2015 12:54:00 AM
    Thoughts of suicide are very seductive, but we can still resist it's powerful allure. Because being so close to death can bring a new appreciation for life... It was great to see this soulful piece on the winner's list. Congratulations, Rick!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 2/28/2015 6:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much Kelly.
  1. Date: 2/22/2015 8:37:00 PM
    Wow, what a read. How can you pack so many awesome lines into one wee little poem? A masterpiece. Well deserved winner, congratulations.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 2/28/2015 6:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You are kind Scott.
  1. Date: 2/22/2015 8:06:00 PM
    Congrad's on your win. Light & love

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 2/28/2015 6:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Debbie.
  1. Date: 2/22/2015 7:04:00 PM
    Wow...extremely deep, Richard. "I now wish to reside in the light...you no longer seduce me..." Powerful and such words of hope. Congrats on your win. Sandra

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 2/22/2015 7:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your thoughtful comment Sandra.
  1. Date: 2/22/2015 5:45:00 PM
    Richard, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win, Love ~SKAT~

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 2/22/2015 7:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks SKAT.
  1. Date: 2/22/2015 5:24:00 PM
    Richard, Sorry, it took this long to close my contest. Congrats :) NATE

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 2/22/2015 7:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Nathan!
  1. Date: 12/26/2014 11:17:00 PM
    RICHARD, CONGRATULATIONS ... this is a nice sweet little HM... hugs.. Linda

  1. Date: 8/19/2014 7:35:00 AM
    That is such a sexy dance with darkness...well done

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 8/19/2014 8:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi again Casarah. A good morning hug for you.
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