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Dark Horizon

Come to me, my dearest love, cross the deep divide, pray the rising, morning sun calms the raging tide. Waiting, counting days so long, scanning graying skies . . . sail across this heaving sea, rest my weary eyes. © Faye Lanham Gibson, April 12, 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/3/2015 9:53:00 PM
Faye, Congratulations on your Trochee poem win. :) SKAT
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Date: 5/2/2015 9:06:00 PM
Lovely, Faye! Romantic thoughts that glide like a song in this difficult form. Congratulations on your nice win! Sandra
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Date: 5/2/2015 12:11:00 PM
This goes into the dark and romantic file, Faye; I like the flow, too. Congrats on a merited win. // paul
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Date: 5/2/2015 6:47:00 AM
beautifully penned love the romance here:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/2/2015 12:48:00 AM
A lovely and darker one for the 7/5 Trochee lineup. Very nicely done. Congrats in my contest.
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Date: 5/2/2015 12:45:00 AM
FAYE:) Congratulations! Forever ~SKAT~
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Date: 4/14/2015 11:45:00 AM
Hi Faye. I read this 3 times before deciding I really liked it. Nice rhythms. A change from the normal and the flow is very good. Wish it was longer.
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