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Dark December Day

I peer out through the rain-dashed window Upon a dark December day. The gathering gloom my view does hinder – All is dismal, dull and grey. No firmament, just threatening cloud Above the doleful dripping trees That loom behind a misty shroud. This dour scene breeds great unease. Receding landscape, distant, pale, A colourless collage, cold. Now rain is sheeting through the Vale, Drenching villagers, young and old. But wait. A brightness in the sky Is spreading slowly from the West; The wind gives out a final sigh And sunshine comes – a welcome guest ! I venture out and drift along To feel the sun upon my face And hear once more the robin’s song : The Vale is now a happier place.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/14/2014 11:40:00 PM
Mike, . Happy valentines, A nice late warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 2/1/2014 6:44:00 AM
good morning Mike, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT"
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Mike Jones
Date: 2/1/2014 7:07:00 AM
Hello Skat, Thank you for the warm welcome. I was looking to put a brief bio when I was filling out my details but couldn't find one - have I missed something ? I am a retired engineer and have been writing poetry for about 5 years. I am also a keen photographer and often combine poems with pictures as I find this a very expressive format. Looking forward to meeting other members.
Date: 2/1/2014 6:37:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Mike- I choose your first good written poem :)- hope you will write many more in the future :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Mike Jones
Date: 2/1/2014 7:08:00 AM
Hello Anne and thank you for your welcome. I have just discovered Poetrysoup and look forward to taking an active role in its poetry.

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