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Dark Creepy Night

Laying down, out in the open, Here, in the stillness of the night, Looking up to the stars shining bright, The gentle breeze blowing at the fabric, That covers the palest parts of my skin, Taking in the sights of the moon, And the radiance that surrounds it, The transparent clouds float on by, A shadow Something moved beside me, Alarming me to this unnerving sensation, My body prickled like a spider creeping Crawling up my skin, The beast breathed sending my worst fears, Afraid it was going to eat me, My eyes moved to the side to look, Now I wished I didn’t I was frozen by the sight of its eyes, Its eyes glistened with its evil thoughts, He appeared out of nowhere beside me, Baring all his teeth, I saw the beasts pink gums its purely white sharp teeth, Like fangs on a wolf the drool hang from the side of its mouth, The drool it bobbled with the movement of its tongue, Growling and grunting, That repulsive smell of its was bloodcurdling like a Decomposed corpse in a casket . In one quick movement, it howl With my last share, I Cringed has it started Feasting on my skin. written for the creep me out contest by Davina browne 2015

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Date: 10/15/2015 6:13:00 PM
"The gentle breeze blowing at the fabric, That covers the palest parts of my skin" I adore those meticulously beautiful words, Davina. This is a chilling piece indeed. The last two lines are especially grotesque, and you use the right amount of creepiness and tension throughout. Weird one, but I love it! Always, Laura
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