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Dancing With Lust - Collaboration

Written by CayCay Jennings and Mark Woods Tip-toeing to the music Appealing turning flow Pirouetting, fling quick Perpetual lover’s glow They’re moving Grooving Blood begins to flow. Rhythmical growing sound Creating trembling sway Tunes make for yearning Takes all their cares away They’re sailing Sharing Ardors clear display. Deliberate sensual stirring Pulses summoned by the beat Melody softly changing Sustaining precious heat They’re teasing Breathing Intense moves repeat. Every note now flirting Revealing passion strong Building an intimate need Blending want within the song They’re burning Aching Senses are now gone. Caressing gentle measure Notes etch upon the flesh Urging gently drives them Want catches in each chest They’re craving Cresting Dancing twosome mesh.

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Paul Callus

Date: 10/7/2015 2:40:00 PM

I award a top 7 rating to this lovely collaboration, Mark & CayCay. The music flows from the patterned rhyme; the passionate lust builds up as the tempo increases sensuously. ~ Regards // paul

Mark Woods
Date: 10/7/2015 9:38:00 PM

Thank you so much Paul, it was an enjoyable experience combining to do a collaboration. We tried to keep to a rhythm to keep a musical quality to the poem.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 9/23/2015 9:36:00 PM

Dear Mark Great Collaboration loved the feeling of it, and the imagery it's magical, cheri

Mark Woods
Date: 9/24/2015 12:57:00 AM

Cheri, your kind words have left me with a warm glow. Thank you so much.

Constance La France

Date: 9/23/2015 3:31:00 PM

Mark and Cayay, a beautiful write by two wonderful poets 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, erotic ...

Mark Woods
Date: 9/24/2015 12:56:00 AM

BW you're an inspiration and the 7 is very flattering. : )

Michael Tor

Date: 9/23/2015 10:41:00 AM

Mark excellent collaboration. Flows perfectly.

Mark Woods
Date: 9/24/2015 12:54:00 AM

Cheers Michael, it was fun to share and discuss inspirations in fact down right awesome.

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/23/2015 8:39:00 AM

Mark this is an awesome collaboration. Love the flow of it :)

Mark Woods
Date: 9/24/2015 12:52:00 AM

So glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for your kind words.

Kevin Leake

Date: 9/23/2015 3:09:00 AM

A really nice piece of music in the making Mark, Enjoyed this nice work!! Best Wishes Kevin

Mark Woods
Date: 9/23/2015 4:15:00 AM

Cheers Kevin, it was an pleasurable to write with CayCay, and hopefully others get the same pleasure from reading it.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 9/23/2015 2:49:00 AM

To both of you Mark and Caycay, a fluid seduction scene complete with sassy sultry imagery and appeal also to the senses.. I like the the third and 4th lines in the first stanza.. =`) keep it up!!~Olive ELoisa =`)

Mark Woods
Date: 9/23/2015 4:08:00 AM

It was great to write with such a fine poetess, thank you for your kind comments.