Dancers

Dainty toes glide on the floor Displaying pas de deux; Dash of ballet enthralls… Dancers leaping mid-air Delightful footwork swirls. Dame and partner blend turns Dazzling from crowd’s applause! 8/30/2016 Kim Merryman’s Pleiades –D Contest

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 9/19/2016 6:29:00 AM

I am beginning to love pleiades. This is good and dazzling applause to you, Kai

Augustus Black

Date: 9/16/2016 1:32:00 AM

Oh, this is quite amazing. wow.... You have written in a very unique way. Great poem. 7/7 Applause.

Augustus Black

Date: 9/16/2016 1:31:00 AM

Oh, this is quite amazing. wow.... You have written in a very unique way. Great poem. 7/7 Applause.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/4/2016 3:11:00 AM

OMG Nette, this was kept from the winning list by one syllable I am sure. First line, if you take out one word like 'on' it would have won a top spot for certain. Had I read this before it was too late I would have let you know.I adore it! Love, Connie

Tom Arnone

Date: 9/2/2016 2:52:00 PM

I like this Pleiades –D. Are you writing from personal experience?

Paul Callus

Date: 8/30/2016 11:47:00 AM

The crowd's applause goes to the dancers...mine goes to the author of this delightful poem! 'Tis a delightful pleiades, Nette' ballet is such a lovely theme to write about! Hugs // paul

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/29/2016 10:38:00 PM

I wish I could dance, lovely poem!

Tim Smith

Date: 8/29/2016 4:18:00 PM

terrific nette...I did a poem of dance too but not like this

Jajosh Ongado

Date: 8/29/2016 3:28:00 PM

I like the delicacy of this elegant poem. The imagery is also exceptional "leaping mid-air." Dance away!