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Dance with me under the rain

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Dance with me under the rain

As the rain falls down from the velvet sky, take my hand and we will walk a while. Let us bathe under the pouring rain and let the pain flow into the stream. Draw out your arms let us play, take one more step, stay close to me. Squeeze me tighter kiss me tenderly, I just can’t help but feel love. Let’s get together and dance in the rain. Spin me around, twirling away the sorrow, dance with me under the rain I’m crazy and I made you insane Laughing, joking under the rain let’s forget our troubles, just dance. Dance with me under the rain. Cheryl Aldea Lets Dance Contest – nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 3/19/2012 6:41:00 PM
    Thank you everyone... have a wonderful morning... take care! Cheryl

  1. Date: 3/19/2012 11:17:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Let's Dance" contest Cheryl. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/17/2012 5:13:00 PM
    'WONDERFUL. BIG congrats. WEll deserved.

  1. Date: 3/17/2012 4:48:00 PM
    Your poem evokes a peaceful place where one longs to be, congrats Cheryl in your winning poetry love and light vie

  1. Date: 3/17/2012 2:44:00 PM
    i love dancing in the rain, cheryl... bewitching!.. congrats on your win in my contest..:) hugggs!

  1. Date: 3/17/2012 12:27:00 PM
    Congratulations on your rain dance conjuring up a win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/17/2012 12:07:00 PM
    congrats Cheryl on an awesome win for this splendid write on lets dance.. romantic one.. luv..

  1. Date: 3/16/2012 2:43:00 AM
    A lovely and sweet poem Cheryl, like it alot. - Have a lovely day to you. - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 3/16/2012 1:34:00 AM
    nice, cheryl and thanks for joining.. did you mean " and let the pain FLOW?".. hope you can review this before judging time..:) huggs!