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dance on glass

I know her dance on glass at night
and how directs soul’s wounds to string
upon the nimbus raindrops cling
- prismatic moon of broken light.

Then she becomes faint shape to frame
her misty wander - face and faith
before the tears - beloved her wraith
pristine and fair her ancient name.

Lone garden’s sadness in her eyes
celestial blue - emerald coast
becomes her verse,  solitudes’ host
and repercussions that incise.

She gallivants untimely role
(in void’s catastrophe stars glare) 
soul dances in the scent of air, 
evanescent the path of Sol.

She gallivants marginal dreams
and stars become far blinking smiles
how lonesome are the winter isles
and the ship’s frozen steel-made brims! 

Descending light - circular flare
that fades away, beyond skylines
- erstwhile her soul shall sail on brines
evanescent celestial stare.

© G. V., 05-25-2013, All Rights Reserved
(Iambic tetrameter)

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  1. Date: 5/26/2013 3:07:00 PM
    beautiful words and meter. this is the meter I always have in my head. It really distracts me from ever writing free verse because I am constantly using iambic pentameter. You are good at it. well, I have to say, limericks and other forms, of course we change the meter. I bet you do those well too.

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 6/4/2013 11:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you. I noticed your beautiful writing, too. I am impressed. G.
  1. Date: 5/26/2013 10:10:00 AM
    A beautiful poem

  1. Date: 5/25/2013 4:57:00 PM
    Dancing on glass would be a slippery stance..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Unique indeed is the poetic endeavor..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara