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Dance Of The Angels

As white winged angels pin point their toes on a creamy cloud,
Ecstasy slowly discharge from love drenched chamber of their pure hearts
Solitary stars turn spectators of the magical dance

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  1. Date: 6/13/2011 7:12:00 PM
    It has an ethereal presence I like. Love Vie.

  1. Date: 6/13/2011 6:36:00 AM
    Congrats on your win in this contest too with this splendid the winged angels dancing with pointed toes on clouds..gautami

  1. Date: 6/12/2011 6:21:00 PM
    Wonderful Sijo ...Congrats Joseph on your win..thanks for your comments at my pages...

  1. Date: 6/12/2011 12:07:00 PM
    Quite a beautiful and dreamy feel to this Sijo of yours Joseph!! Congratulations on your win ;)

  1. Date: 6/12/2011 11:11:00 AM
    j.O.O., Congratulations!!!! Thank you for the awesome entry short & carries a magical grace. I am also honored to have you supporting my contest. Don't miss out on my next one.. Take care,..p.d.

  1. Date: 6/12/2011 11:06:00 AM
    Very dreamy, soft and innocent sijo, Joseph. Has a nice meditative quality to the imagery. Congratulations on your win~!

  1. Date: 6/12/2011 9:47:00 AM
    no wonder this places high-- I enjoyed this the first time around, enjoyed it again , Joseph -- super congrats on your win :D

  1. Date: 6/12/2011 8:58:00 AM
    My congratulations on the win in the contest of p.d., Joseph

  1. Date: 6/12/2011 8:02:00 AM
    Congrats Joseph on another fantastic win in PD's contest ..luv the title and content mucho luv..

  1. Date: 6/12/2011 2:39:00 AM
    there you go, joseph!! perky cheers for the amazing award!! :) huggs

  1. Date: 5/31/2011 9:28:00 PM
    Just rereading this lovely one. Sorry it did not place. Thanks for your nice words on my writing. Let me see one more of yours before I turn in for the night!

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    Date: 6/2/2011 2:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Dear Andrea,thanks for your lovely comment on my poem.I didn't submit the poem for the contest, though it was inspired by the picture of the contest
  1. Date: 5/31/2011 1:51:00 PM
    What a very beautiful take on the photo, Joseph :) enjoyed how you depict them as dancing angels :)

  1. Date: 5/31/2011 1:27:00 AM
    i sway with you, joseph... alluring imagery that is top-rate! :) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 5/29/2011 11:54:00 PM
    this is really pretty, Joseph. I am glad I got to see it tonight as I am getting ready to turn in now!

  1. Date: 5/28/2011 3:33:00 PM
    Sweet... Loved drenched chamber of their pure hearts... Love this line. ~Beloved Faizah

  1. Date: 5/27/2011 2:04:00 PM
    Nice expressions with lovely imagery on dance of the the angels, Joseph