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DANCE OF A HEART

Olive Eloisa Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled DANCE OF A HEART which was written by poet Olive Eloisa Guillermo. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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DANCE OF A HEART

Politely, you take hold of my hand
Together, we tried to be on land
You are leading the command
as we sway for some fun...

I catch your diamond stare
I did not see any glare.
Rather, I feel something flare.
Persons around, yells, 
"we could be a pair..."

We round-and-round unto the floor
Not wanting to stop the music 
Requesting for more.
My heart seems to sing and soar
For I  feel it right through my core...

© O. E. Guillermo

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  1. Date: 10/26/2014 9:16:00 AM
    you sure danced beautiful in this piece olive

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 10/26/2014 7:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :) thanks
  1. Date: 10/16/2014 2:01:00 PM
    A touch of romance, fragrance, smooching dance, take that chance, James :)

    Fraser Avatar James Fraser
    Date: 10/17/2014 11:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I know Olive :( - James :)
    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 10/17/2014 10:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    yes it is.. mr james,, :D one of my frustrations though..:D :P
  1. Date: 7/30/2013 12:51:00 AM
    A romantic brewin luv poem. Way to go pal, dis came out lovely!

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 10/17/2014 10:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks much.. :) God bless you.. :D