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Dance In the Dark

Dancing in the moonlight, your feet are on mine Our arms wrapped tight, as our bodies intertwine We move slowly in unison, the feelings grow strong Two hearts beating as one, to Norah's sweet love song

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Jan Allison

Date: 2/25/2015 5:24:00 PM

such beautiful imagery - were you listening to a Norah Jones song? :-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx

Jan Allison
Date: 2/25/2015 6:07:00 PM

It is a most beautiful track David - we are listening to Phil Collin's 'face value' cd :-) Hugs jan xx

David Brown
Date: 2/25/2015 5:53:00 PM

Thank you Jan, indeed we were listening to 'Come away with me'...David

Emile Pinet

Date: 2/25/2015 1:56:00 PM

This is very good with superb imagery and the emotion grabs you from the start and never lets go. Emile. #7

David Brown
Date: 2/25/2015 5:52:00 PM

Thank you so much Emile, that is very kind.