Dance

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Dips and TURNS are all part Delicate footwork too Dedication a must . . . Daily l o n g rehearsals D i z z y spinning is fun Difficult leaping moves DELIGHTFUL the applause . . . _______________ August 28, 2016 Poetry/Pleisades/Verse/Dance Copyright Protected, ID 16-824-005-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, Pleisades D sponsor, Kim Merryman Fourth Place

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James Inman

Date: 9/3/2016 10:23:00 AM

Lovely dancing words but its always about the applause (subconscious emotional acceptance, often the sign of a depressed sometimes extremely introverted personality).

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/1/2016 7:38:00 PM

Constance, I love the way you formatted your poem. Capitalizing some words and spacing out others and the uneven lines gave your work energy, made it dance! Congrats on your win! Blessings!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/1/2016 4:45:00 AM

- I remember this one, B.W. - Congratulations on your placement in the contest, with this beautiful write :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Viv Wigley

Date: 9/1/2016 12:34:00 AM

Congratulations, Constance, a lovely write. Viv x

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/1/2016 12:29:00 AM

I adore ballet Constance. Your poem is lovely! Congratulations on your win! ; ) 7

Lu Loo

Date: 8/31/2016 8:00:00 PM

Broken Wings, lovely poem and very delightful...congrats on your placement! :)-luloo

Augustus Black

Date: 8/31/2016 8:10:00 AM

Well, this is called a poem. Wow.... Just unique and fabulous. Short but very effective. I like this write. Especially the last line. Can't put aside the picture above. Great write. Take care.