Dance

The evolution of a dance is the way of a stance, The way one moves or grooves. It's all a game of chance or what you see at a glance, Even the lame can dance. There is no shame of who wants to dance even the blind will dance or steal the moment as they are kind of a revolution in their own way, they are proud and prideful

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Nadia Shahwan

Date: 4/21/2009 5:56:00 AM

Words flow beautifully and soothingly. Pls repeat both stanzas as..2nd (being the third stanza) then the 1st (being the last stanza)...reentry as lyric; then contact a musician. All the best.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/6/2009 3:00:00 PM

Cheryl, this is so beauiful. The features of the week are on the home page to answer the question you asked with your comment. Keep on writing and sharing with us. Love, Carol

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 4/6/2009 2:36:00 AM

An uplifting write, that evokes the muse... of course you are right for there is freedom and emotion, to be found through dance - creative, I liked this..Anna-Marie.

Patricia Langston-Moran

Date: 3/31/2009 10:52:00 AM

Cheryl..thank you for your comments. I just added these poems today and I got so many responses! You too are gifted...I love this poem of yours. Dancing is such a joy and you depict it well in your lovely poem. Patricia

John Rhinem

Date: 3/31/2009 8:27:00 AM

Hmm, this is a very interesting write dear lady!?:)~"Good Morning Precious & Gifted Cheryl McCall!":)~Yes, dancing holds many wonderful possibilities to be experienced and enjoyed by any and all!:)~And Your last stanza left myself pondering the thought of how the blind could even more so enjoy the dancing amid the music; uninhibited by the distractions of visions about them!? Smile~"Excellent Cheryl!":)~"My Love & Warmth Always To 'You & Your Loves,' John!"~Have A Very Gorgeous Day Dear Lady!:)

Lena Townsend

Date: 3/31/2009 6:47:00 AM

This made me laugh a bit, have you seen the you tube videos "Evolution of Dance" and "Evolution of Dance 2" if you haven't you really should. This is a great write. Dance is truly expressive as are the words that flow from your pen (or keyboard in this case) and the depths of you soul. Smiles from Lolita

L'Nass Shango

Date: 3/31/2009 5:22:00 AM

The dance collapse space into motions of time, and make me feel the way this poem inspires me to feel. Love and peace

Leon Wilson

Date: 3/31/2009 4:36:00 AM

Great poem Cheryl I love to watch the old Top Of The Pops programme (its a music show) people dance as the Artists sing and you see all the fashions that were in the sixties. Thanks for the memories. Thankyou for your comment on my poem battle ground. God Bless. Leon

James Marshall Goff

Date: 3/31/2009 4:20:00 AM

beautiful! the blind revolution, it's about time, nice write, Jim